Wonderful Winter Wonderland
We are learning to make a screencastify. A screencastify is when you read your story and then it will show you if you make it show you some how I can't explain it. The story is about going to Mt Hutt and skiing. It is also about what happened before we went skiing! I have made a screencastify on my writing about going skiing at Mt Hutt! Enjoy it because I know I did!
I think mine is amazing because the writing is really long although I could do more work!
I also had fun making it! (Sorry if it's not good quality)
N.S (Next Step): Use a more complicated vocabulary and take my time on the writing and probably give more information about what happened!
Hi Amelia, Your writing was really good and has lots of adjectives and information, The quality and audio has gone weird but the writing was really good!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Amelia. Thank you for sharing this. For some reason your sound has a crackle so we will need to work on this next time. I like how you used expression in you read aloud. I like your next step as we will work on this during our writing sessions.
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