The Horrible Incident (Not Real)
Hey, today we are going to be looking at my slide that I made. First it started out as a doc and I wrote from pictures. After that I inserted it to a slide. I had so much fun writing this because I just enjoy writing I hope that you like it. Also if you cry very easily I wouldn't read paragraph six if I was you. Okay here it is!So I edited it on the 25/11/2016. This is so cool and I really enjoyed making it. Please comment your favourite part/paragraph and I will try reply as soon as I can. Also check out these three blogs. I will now put in 1 blog link everypost, it will be called Blog Of The Post. Here they are:
Hannah.O
Izzy
Tamara
Check them out because they are friend's of mine and have amazing post's! Posting later!
Hey there Amelia :) Hannah N Here!
ReplyDeleteI Absolutely love your writing Meal's I hope I could see more on your blog? but other things then that I love love your writing, for sure I know you done better writing than me! :o
Ka pai I think you next step would be Hmmm? I think you don't need one, sorry if I scared you then but otherwise, keep on blogging because I love your blog :D
Bye!
Hi Amelia it,s Callum I like your story It,s it very good that you used fulstops,capital letters.
ReplyDeleteI like your caracters name like jackson,zachary. Blog u later.
Hi Amelia it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteI love your slide and I love how you said thanx in the end.Your writing is better then mine.
blog you later.
Hi Amelia.
ReplyDeleteThat slide and story is so cool!!
I love how you named the four mountains that were in the story it makes the story really interesting!!!
I also like the names that you picked for the characters they are cool and weird names haha.
I was just wondering, how long did it take for you to write all of this down and put it on a slide?
Did it take 1 day, 2 days, 3 days, 4 days, OR EVEN FIVE DAYS????!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!!!
Hi Amelia, Milan here
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the story that you made when we had to do our own stories. I hope you are proud of yourself if you are not you should be.
Anyway this story reminds me of my uncle,he was really naughty when he was a kid and he even was always rushing when it was a race.
This was really interesting hopefully you can check out my blog and when I do get this story up on my blog I'll let you know. Okay dokey. Catch you later bye.
Hey there Chloe here again
ReplyDeleteI love this you have used so much discripteve launguge witch I love I wonder if next we can do what happens at the hospital once again ill see you next time